The line chart shows global population trends as a percentage from 1950 to 2040. To summarize information by selecting key characteristics and compiling a report and, if necessary, make a comparison.

The line chart shows global population trends as a percentage from 1950 to 2040. To summarize information by selecting key characteristics and compiling a report and, if necessary, make a comparison.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line chart shows global population trends as a percentage from 1950 to 2040. To summarize information by selecting key characteristics and compiling a report and, if necessary, make a comparison.
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The image given above depicts two line graphs. The first one gives information about the historical trend and
pridictions
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predictions

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about variations in proportions of world populations both in
cities
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and villages
spaning
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spanning

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from 1950 to 2040.
In addition
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, the second one depicts the changes
of
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the global
population
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in the different
age
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groups for the same period.
To begin
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with, people have tended to live more in urban
area
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areas

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. As it is observable, the
population
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of
cities
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has increased gradually, constituting one-fourth of the total
population
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by the 2020s.
Moreover
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, it is expected that with a more positive
gradiant
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gradient

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, it will rise to approximately 40%.
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, the rural
population
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was significantly less than those settled in the
cities
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. Starting
nearly
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at nearly

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under five
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percent
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per cent

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, it
had
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experienced negligible fluctuations for three successive decades before it
has
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increased slowly and trivially for the rest of the examined years. The forecast shows that it might keep its trend and stop at under ten
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percent
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per cent

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at
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in

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the
last
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year. Now turning our attention to the other graph, the middle
age
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group, between 15 and 65, has had the most remarkable increase
in
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among all
age
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categories. with over 5
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percent
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per cent

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in 1950, it has been
steadlly
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steadily
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rising to make nearly
on-third
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one-third

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of the world
population
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by the
precent
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present
per cent

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time.
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, it may
growth
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with
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at

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slower
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a slower
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pace, and
probabily
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probably

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stop at 35
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percent
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per cent

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in 2040. The trends for two other
age
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groups,
olderlys
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older

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and youngsters, are
simillar
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similar

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to the rural
population
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's one; commencing with under 5
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percent
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per cent

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, and both having a
notebly
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notably
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correlated
curvs
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curves
curve

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, they will reach over 5
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percent
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per cent

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in the
last
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decade.
Overall
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, More people have settled and will reside in
cities
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and metropolitans, and individuals
with
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aged

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age
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between 15 and 65 will have the
greates
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greatest

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population
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in urban areas.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, population, age, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "depicts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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