The graph below shows the percentage of unemployed people aged between 15 and 24 in five European countries in 2005, compared with the overall percentage of unemployment in those countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
unemployment
rate in Poland, Italy, Hungary, Germany and Denmark
in 2005.
Overall
, the highest number of unemployed people under 24 years
old and overall
unemployment
were both in Poland, while
Italy ranked in the second position for unemployment
rate of individuals 15-24 Add an article
an unemployment
the unemployment
years
old. However
, Denmark
was the country with the lowest rate for both categories.
Regarding to
individuals aged 15-24 Remove the preposition
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years
old, Poland experienced the greatest number of unemployement
at approximately 35%, which Correct your spelling
unemployment
slightly
different compared to Italy, which recorded around 28% as Add a missing verb
is slightly
a
second place. Correct article usage
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In addition
, Hungary and Germany had a similar percentage of jobless people under 24 years
old around at
22 and 23%. Change preposition
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In contrast
, the percentage of jobless people in Denmark
was the lowest number at 12% compared to all countries.
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of Fix the agreement mistake
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overall
unemployed
, Replace the word
unemployment
Denmark
also
experienced the least proportion of unemployment
at only 9%, which was followed by Hungary and Italy in second and third place.Submitted by anggiagni on
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