The pie charts below shows the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014.

The pie charts below shows the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014.
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The pie charts illustrate the distribution of volunteers across six different organisations in terms of percentage in the years 2008 and 2014.
Overall
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, at the beginning of the
period
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,
educational
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education
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made the highest contribution,
while
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health care made up the smallest part of the chart. In comparison, health care made the lowest contribution and the highest one
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made up by the environmental organisations
at the end
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of the
period
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. Sports accounted for 15% in 2008 and went up by 25% in 2014. At the inception of the
period
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, the percentage of environmental volunteers was 21% and experienced a significant rise to 29% in 2014. Health care, which comprised 7% in 2008, increased by 1% and reached 8%
at the end
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of the
period
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. In 2008, volunteers for others, which accounted for 15% showed
nearly
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twofold decrease to 9% in 2014. Meanwhile,
educational
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education
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and
art
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arts
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were 24% and 18% at the beginning
as well as
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both of these categories experienced a fall to 17% and 12%, respectively after a 6-year
period
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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