The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevent.
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The given bar chart illustrates the
share
of males
and females among the five age groups
in Australia who had regular physical activity
in 2010.
Overall
, men
were less active than women
except in the 15 to 24 years old group
. Moreover
, nearly the same share
of males
and females in the 65 and over group
did physical activity
. Females in the 45 to 54 group
had the highest proportion, and males
in the 35 to 44 group
had the lowest proportion.
It is clearly seen that women
in all categories did more regular physical activity
than men
except for the 15 to 24 group
. Furthermore
, the share
of women
who did physical activity
in the 15 to 24, 25 to 34, 35 to 44, and 45 to 54 groups
grew constantly, then
it decreased in the 55 to 64 and 65 and over groups
. Additionally
, women
in the 45 to 54 group
had the highest share
with 53.3 percent, and this
group
had the biggest difference from men
.
It is evident that the percentage of men
in the 15 to 24, 25 to 34, and 35 to 44 groups
declined continuously, but in the 45 to 54, 55 to 64, and 65 and over groups
, it rose. Afterwards, the lowest percentage of the group
is males
35 to 44 years old. Also
, men
and women
in the 65 and over group
had roughly the same percentage, which is 46.7 and 47.1 percent
, respectively.Change the spelling
per cent
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