The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.
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The bar charts present the proportion of
males
and females doing housework in a nation. Also
, this
includes the time
they allocate to various tasks.
Overall
, females have the highest proportion and time
in cooking and cleaning while
the percentage of pet
care
and house repairs are higher in men. Additionally
, the time
both genders allot in pet
care
is equal.
In detail, the highest percentage in the first chart are the females doing cooking with just above 80%, this
has a 20% difference from males
. Also
, women
acquire the highest figure in cleaning at a little more than 60% while
men only have an exact 40%. It is opposite to the result in pet
care
at around 22% and house repairs at nearly 20% in which males
have the highest proportions.
Furthermore
, women
greatly allot their time
to cooking
for more than 80 Replace the word
cook
minutes
while
men only spend an hour doing the activity. In cleaning it is also
the women
who allocate less than 70 minutes
, however
males
take about 45 minutes
. In pet
care
, they equally give 20 minutes
of their time
, but, when it comes to house repairs, males
put around 19 minutes
meanwhile, women
only allocate about 5 minutes
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