The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the number of temporary migrant worker in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart displays the amount of migrant
workers
in the US, the UK, Australia and New Zealand in the years 2003 and 2006, and
also
compares their numbers with the local population.
Overall
, the
number
of foreign employees increased in all four countries, during the given period.
Also
, America had the highest
number
of migrant
workers
compared to that of New Zealand, which had the lowest in both years.
To begin
, the United States had the highest
number
of foreign
workers
, with 577,000 and 678,000, in 2003 and 2006 respectively. In the second spot was the UK, with 137,000 employees in 2003 and 266,000 in 2006. Not far behind, in third place, was Australia with roughly one hundred fifty thousand migrant
workers
in 2003.
This
number
increased by roughly a quarter to 219,000 in 2006. In the
last
place was New Zealand with Less than one hundred thousand migrant
workers
in both years, but they have the highest proportion, with 21.1 per 1000 people.
On the contrary
, America had the lowest with only 2.3 people per 1000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words workers, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • temporary migrant workers
  • trends
  • absolute numbers
  • per 1,000 people
  • growth rate
  • per capita
  • labor markets
  • economies
  • significant
  • imply
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