The charts below show the percentage of water used different purposes in six areas of the world

The charts below show the percentage of water used different purposes in six areas of the world
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The pie charts compare information about the consumption of aqua for different purposes in six regions of the world.
Overall
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, agriculture accounts for the largest share of drink usage in most regions, particularly in Central Asia, Africa, South East Asia and South
America
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industrial use dominates in Europe and North
America
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. Domestic rain use remains the smallest category across all areas except South
America
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. In North
America
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and Europe, the largest proportion of water is used for industry, with the former remained almost 50% and the letter witnessing 53%; the second highest share, 39% and 32%
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is allocated to agricultural purposes
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less than half of
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figure is associated with households.
In contrast
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, expenditure on domestic targets was subsidiary in South
America
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, with almost 20%. In South continents – Africa, Central and South East Asia – the disparity between consumption of water on agronomies and industrial and domestic were significant
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the figure for letters
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almost similar, experiencing less than 10%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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