The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart illustrates the rate of unemployment in 3 geographical regions, between 1993 and 2007.
Overall
, during the given 14-year period
,unemployment decreased in the United Kingdom and EU, whereas
in Japan
it increased. However
, Japan
had the lowest percentage of unemployed people throughout the given period
.
In 1993, 11% of the population in England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland were not working. This
figure reduced sharply over the next eight years to almost 5%, by 2001, then
remained relatively stable to end the period
at around 6%. Compared to that, in 1993, unemployment was at 9% in the rest of Europe. Initially
, it rose to 11% by 1997, becoming the highest among all the three areas, and then
declined steadily over the next decade to just under 8% by 2007.
On the other hand
, Japan
with only 2% of people being unemployed in 1993, were at the bottom . Japan
's rate doubled in the next 14 years to end the period
at 4%.Submitted by saadanwer89 on
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