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The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
production
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 of
timber
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,
paper
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, and
pulp
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 in a specific European country between 1980 and 2000, measured in
units
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.
Overall
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,
while
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 the
production
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 of
paper
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 and
pulp
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 showed a steady increase over the period,
timber
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 experienced significant fluctuations. By the end of the period,
pulp
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production
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 had surpassed both
paper
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 and
timber
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. In detail,
timber
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production
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 started at 10
units
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 in 1980, the highest among the three items, but fell sharply to just over 6
units
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 by 1995. It recovered slightly to just under 8
units
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 in 2000.
In contrast
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,
pulp
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production
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,
initially
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 the lowest at just over 2
units
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, rose significantly to reach approximately 6
units
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 by 1995, maintaining
this
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 level until 2000. Meanwhile,
paper
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production
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 exhibited consistent growth, rising from around 4
units
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 in 1980 to over 8
units
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 by 1995, before ending at 10
units
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 in 2000, surpassing
timber
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, timber, paper, pulp, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trends
  • Fluctuations
  • Steady growth
  • Decline
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Production levels
  • Significant
  • Patterns
  • Comparison
  • 20-year period
  • Data
  • Forest industry products
  • Percentage
  • Amount
  • European country
  • Analysis
  • Observation
  • Graph
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