You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam

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Dear Sir/Madam, Hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to register my complaint regarding the

accomodation

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in a college. My name is Navdeep

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and I live in

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number 22a at our hostel. As

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is shared by my

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too.As my roommate has many friends in the hostel I found difficulty in sleeping and studying

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room

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because

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whole

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day his friends

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. Apart

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, as I am

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an introvert

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person and I do not like to make new friends I feel uncomfortable and shy

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I request you to kindly look at my problem and I

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. If possible please

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so that I can prepare for my exams and feel comfortable. Looking forward to hearing a positive and prompt response from your side. Yours faithfully, Navdeep

navdeepbajaj89Tue Dec 03 2024

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single idea per paragraph

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve clarity.

coherence cohesion

Break down long sentences for better readability.

complete response

Provide more details regarding the specific issues with your current situation.

greeting and closing

The greeting and closing are polite and appropriately formatted for a formal letter.

logical structure

The letter logically addresses the situation, providing both the problem and a suggested solution.

suitable writing tone

The overall tone of the letter is polite and formal, suitable for addressing an official.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

162 words

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