The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The pie chart compares different kinds of
energy
construction in France in 1995 and 2005.
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Overall
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it is clear that
coal was the most produced Linking Words
energy
in both years, Use synonyms
whereas
the opposite was true for other energies, with the lowest Linking Words
production
in 1995 and 2005 .
The first popular Use synonyms
energy
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production
was coal . In 1995 Use synonyms
production
of coal was less than in 2005, 29.80% and 30,93%, respectively. The second Use synonyms
energy
with high Use synonyms
production
was gas. In 1995 gas Use synonyms
production
was 29.63%, Use synonyms
whereas
in 2005 was 30.31%. The third Linking Words
energy
with more Use synonyms
production
was Use synonyms
petro
. Petrol Change the capitalization
Petro
production
in 1995 was more than it produced in 2005, 29.27% and 19.55%. The fourth Use synonyms
energy
with more Use synonyms
production
was nuclear. Nuclear Use synonyms
production
in 1995 was less than in 2005. Nuclear Use synonyms
production
was 6.40% in 1995, Use synonyms
whereas
in 2005 was 10.10%. Linking Words
Finally
, the Linking Words
last
Linking Words
energy
is other energies. In 1995 other Use synonyms
energy
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production
was less than in 2005, 4.90% and 9.10%, respectively.Use synonyms
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