The line graph indicated the information about the number of questionnaires collected from Tourist Information office in a city based on individual, letter/email and telephone by first 6 months in 2011
The chart depicts the number of survey
responses
received by a Visitors Information Office in an area via multiple modes of communication during the first half of 2011.Use synonyms
Overall
, the most popular ways of collecting Linking Words
questionnaires
were through telephone and in person Use synonyms
while
the least famous were via letter and email.
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According to
the data, survey Linking Words
responses
collected in person were the lowest in January at about 400 Use synonyms
responses
. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
Linking Words
subsequently
the trend changed and moved upward throughout the period and shot up to around 1900 Add a comma
subsequently,
responses
in June. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, tourists communicating the questionnaire by telephone showed a shortage of 100 Linking Words
questionnaires
in January to just around 800 Use synonyms
questionnaires
in February before continued to rise and stood exactly at 1600 in June.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, survey Linking Words
responses
received via letters and emails started at just below 800 Use synonyms
questionnaires
in January and declined Use synonyms
further
before remaining constant at nearly 400 in both May And June.
Linking Words
To conclude
, tourists had preferred modes of communicating Linking Words
questionnaires
that varied from month to month.Use synonyms
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