The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the substantial changes in the landscape and the development that had taken
placed
in the village, called Ryemouth, between 1995 and Change the form of the verb
place
present
day.
Correct article usage
the present
Overall
, it can be seen that the village of Ryemouth had turned from a
agricultural community into Change the article
an
residential
town.
In 1995, Add an article
a residential
in
the eastern Change preposition
apply
side
of Ryemouth had wide spaces of farmland and forest park. The residential area was located opposite , the western, to
farmland. The southern Change preposition
apply
side
of village
was an accommodation Add an article
the village
for instance
shop, fish
market and Correct article usage
a fish
fishing
port. The hotel and café were located next to Correct article usage
a fishing
shop
and fish market at that time.
Nowadays, Considerable changes Correct article usage
a shop
took
place in the town as the number of buildings and public structures Wrong verb form
have taken
increase
. Wrong verb form
has increased
For instance
, in
the eastern Change preposition
on
side
of the town, farmland and forest park were demolished and replaced with golf
course and tennis court. Whilst, in the western Correct article usage
a golf
side
construction of houses increased. Others
notable Correct quantifier usage
Other
development
Fix the agreement mistake
developments
is
shops were substituted by Correct subject-verb agreement
are
restaurant
, Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
fish
market was displaced by Add an article
the fish
apartment
and Fix the agreement mistake
apartments
fishing
port was dismantled. The location of Correct article usage
the fishing
café
and hotel are same as Correct article usage
the café
1995
but on Change preposition
in 1995
these day
the car park around Change the determiner
this day
these days
hotel
was built.Add an article
the hotel
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "for instance".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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