The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The line chart
illustrate
the Change the verb form
illustrates
conumption
of chicken and Correct your spelling
consumption
differnt
types of Correct your spelling
different
meat
in Use synonyms
europe
countries between 1979 and 2004. The Change the capitalization
Europe
unites
are measured in Replace the word
units
grams
per Use synonyms
person
per week.
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Overall
, Linking Words
its
clear to say that chickens are elevated strongly increased. Replace the word
it's
it is
However
, the other three Linking Words
soureces
of Correct your spelling
sources
meat
have decreased Use synonyms
respectivly
.
Based on what Correct your spelling
respectively
it
shown in the graph, in 1979 Correct your spelling
is
people
consumed around 150 Use synonyms
grams
per Use synonyms
person
, but Use synonyms
then
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it's
dramatically Unnecessary verb
it
inreased
until 1994, and Correct your spelling
increased
then
it reached Linking Words
it
peak in 2004 by nearly 250 Change the pronoun
its
grams
. Use synonyms
On the other
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hand
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hand,
humens
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humans
have
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
consumed 220 Linking Words
grams
of beef in 1979 Use synonyms
then
it suddenly Linking Words
decresed
in the early 80s but Correct your spelling
decreased
at the end
of Linking Words
80s
Correct article usage
the 80s
people
Use synonyms
have
consumed more so the percentage went up at the time. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, it didn't Linking Words
last
long so it went deep down to 100 Linking Words
grams
per Use synonyms
person
in 2004.
In terms of Use synonyms
lamb
and fish, in 1979 Use synonyms
people
consumed 150 Use synonyms
grams
of Use synonyms
lamb
Use synonyms
in addition
they have consumed nearly 60 Linking Words
grams
of fish, Use synonyms
According to
what it Linking Words
shown
, Add the auxiliary verb
was shown
for
over Change preposition
apply
the
time. the line graph for fish consumption Correct article usage
apply
its
Correct your spelling
is
basically
fluctuation Change the adverb
basic
Linking Words
therefore
, it remains the same until 2004. unlike Add the comma(s)
, therefore
lamb
, in 1982 it dropped to 120 Use synonyms
grams
per Use synonyms
person
, and Use synonyms
then
it got a minor growth Linking Words
at the end
of Linking Words
80s
Correct article usage
the 80s
furthermore
, Linking Words
people
tend to rely more on other sources of Use synonyms
meat
which led Use synonyms
people
to Use synonyms
cosume
less Correct your spelling
consume
of
Change preposition
apply
lamb
Use synonyms
meat
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
lamb
consumption Use synonyms
have
downturn to 60 Change the verb form
has
grams
in 2004.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meat, grams, person, people, lamb with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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