Task 1: The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The static chart below illustrates the subject and gender,
as well as
the percentage of students
, who passed their high school competency exams
in 2010 and 2011.
Overall
, the given data provides information about the amount of students
who passed high school exams
during 2010-2011, by gender and subject. Furthermore
, the chart shows that the highest number
of graduates
were from Computer Science and Mathematics fields, and the lowest was from Chemistry and History exams
.
Firstly
, female students
passing high school tests were higher than boys in every study field except Geography. In addition
, Computer Science and
Mathematics, and foreign languages had high numbers of Correct word choice
apply
graduates
where female students
' percentage was around 50%. Also
, in Chemistry girl graduates
proportion was marginally high with 30.2% compared to boys, where their number
was 14.1%. However
, in Geography studies girls' graduates
' number
was only 20.2%, while
male students
' percentage was 30.4%.
Moreover
, according to
given data, in foreign languages and Mathematics, male students
' numbers were approximately the same, around 50%. As well as
in Physics studies, the gender balance was maintained, but the general students
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student's
students'
number
, who passed their exams
was slightly low, where girls held 33.1% and boys had graduated.
Taking everything into consideration, from the provided data picture, we can draw a conclusion that Computer Science and foreign languages were popular among both genders, while
Geography had more boy students
and Chemistry had more female graduates
in 2010-2011.Submitted by ibragimmamedov2 on
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