The bar chart below shows the percentage of students who passed their high school competency exams, by subject and gender, during the period 2010-2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The static chart below illustrates the subject and gender,
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exams
in 2010 and 2011.
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Overall
, the given data provides information about the amount of Linking Words
students
who passed high school Use synonyms
exams
during 2010-2011, by gender and subject. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the chart shows that the highest Linking Words
number
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graduates
were from Computer Science and Mathematics fields, and the lowest was from Chemistry and History Use synonyms
exams
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Firstly
, female Linking Words
students
passing high school tests were higher than boys in every study field except Geography. Use synonyms
In addition
, Computer Science Linking Words
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Mathematics, and foreign languages had high numbers of Correct word choice
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graduates
where female Use synonyms
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' percentage was around 50%. Use synonyms
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, in Chemistry girl Linking Words
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proportion was marginally high with 30.2% compared to boys, where their Use synonyms
number
was 14.1%. Use synonyms
However
, in Geography studies girls' Linking Words
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while
male Linking Words
students
' percentage was 30.4%.
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according to
given data, in foreign languages and Mathematics, male Linking Words
students
' numbers were approximately the same, around 50%. Use synonyms
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in Physics studies, the gender balance was maintained, but the general Linking Words
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number
, who passed their Use synonyms
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was slightly low, where girls held 33.1% and boys had graduated.
Taking everything into consideration, from the provided data picture, we can draw a conclusion that Computer Science and foreign languages were popular among both genders, Use synonyms
while
Geography had more boy Linking Words
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