The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 and 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 and 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line shows
four
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Asian countries’ population percentages.
While
Malaysia and Indonesia have increased significantly,
Phipilphines
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Philippines
and Thailand witnessed a slight climb from 1970
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to
2040.
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Philippines
increased slightly for the first 10 years and
then
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sharply to nearly 50% in 1990.
Then
it
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steadily to just over 40% in 2010 before
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steadily to over 50% in 2040. Thailand
increase
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increased
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from almost 20% to approximately 30% in 1999. It
then
experienced a
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flatten
until 2010 followed by a
sharply
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climb the rest of the period. Malaysia,
however
,
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from
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30% to approximately 45% in 1990 and
then
rocketed up to just over 80% in
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end. Indonesia
also
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witnessed
a steady climb from nearly 45% at the start of the period to nearly 30% in 2000 before
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experienced
in
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significantly
surge to over 60% in 2040. It is
noticeble
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noticeable
that Malaysia residents’ percentages are higher than the other countries with
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two fold
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increase.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "climb" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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