The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 and 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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four
Asian countries’ population percentages. Correct article usage
the four
While
Malaysia and Indonesia have increased significantly, Phipilphines
and Thailand witnessed a slight climb from 1970 Correct your spelling
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to
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Philippines
then
rise
sharply to nearly 50% in 1990. Wrong verb form
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fell
jumped
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climb the rest of the period.
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witnessed
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significantly
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two fold
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two-fold
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