The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The chart given presents the percentage of regular physical exercises that were done by Australian men and women of different ages in 2010. There is a link in the graph, but it is not consistent.
More than 40
percent
of females aged 15 to 24 do Change the spelling
per cent
regular
activity, and Add an article
a regular
the regular
this
number keeps on rising and reaches above 50 percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
age
35 to 64, and then
it decreases to approximately 47 percent
in the Change the spelling
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age
over 64.
For the male, it can be seen that there is a downline in the age
of 15 to 64, from above 50 percent
to approximately 49 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
then
it is followed by an upline from the age
of 45 to above 64 in the number above 40 percent
.
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per cent
Overall
, we can see the correlation between the two lines that as the number females
increases, the males decrease, and vice versa, but there is an inconsistency in the Change preposition
of females
age
of 45 to 54 where the two of them rise together.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percent, age with synonyms.
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