The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the data about the count of home and international
students
who enrolled to
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on
Computer
Science course at a UK institute from 2010 to 2012.
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a Computer
Overall
, the number of international students
both men and women increased throughout the period. The figure of
female British Change preposition
for
students
rose slightly over the years,
but fluctuated in male home Remove the comma
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students
. Despite this
, both British men and women studying the subject was
higher than the internationals in every year.
In 2010, 20 foreign male Change the verb form
were
students
studied the subject,
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then
climbed significantly to just under 40 by 2012. Conversely
, the digit of British boys was just below 40 in 2010, then
dropped sharply to slightly less than 25 in 2011, before jumping to approximately 43 in 2012.
The local female students
stood at over 30 in 2010 and
followed by a moderate rise to 45 in 2011 and 2012. The least popular category, the overseas women began at just under 15 in 2010 and grew slowly to 20 by 2012.Correct word choice
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