The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the changes in the percentages of industry sectors
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contribution to the economy of Turkey Correct article usage
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eight Change preposition
in
sector
in two Change to a plural noun
sectors
difference
years.
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different
Overall
, agriculture constituted the main sector
at the beginning in
the first year, Change preposition
of
while
healthcare and education was
the main Correct subject-verb agreement
were
sector
in the second year. Furthermore
, construction was the least sector
in 2000, whereas
in 2016, the least sector
was government.
With regards to the contribution from construction, it increased by 7% from a mere 3% in 2000 to 10% in 2016. Similarly
, in the case of manufacturing, it went up from 8% in 2000 to 12% in 2016. Likewise
, trade, Utilities and transportation rose by 2% and finance, Business and others also
increased by 8%.
On the other hand
, it can be clearly seen that agriculture decreased by 10% from a mere 24% in 2000 to 14% in 2016. In terms of leisure and hospitality as well as
government, they dropped by a mere 3%. When comes to healthcare and education, it can be noted that it did not change in the
both years.Remove the article
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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