The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
The table gives information about
percentage
of different household groups living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
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the percentage
It is clear that
sole parents and single families without children have the highest percentage
in terms of living in poverty, while
aged couples
seem to be the smallest in proportion of all households.
To begin
, in 1999, all of categories
to gather formed apply all household types, which was around a population of 2 million and accounted for 11% of poverty in the day. It is obvious that Add an article
the categories
sole
parents have the significantly biggest Correct your spelling
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percentage
in those terms is 21%. Furthermore
, single adults have a slightly higher proportion of 19%, while
there is only a 2% gap between this
figure for sole parents.In contrast
, couples
with children come in second place after these apply
factors by 12%.
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Moreover
, other categories are less poor compared to the ones mentioned. In detail, aged couples
have the lowest figure on family type with only 4%. The couples
that have no children and single aged people, both have the lower percentage
which is below 10%, with 7% and 6% respectively.Submitted by chunyanh502 on
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