The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart depicts how electricity is produced in a hydroelectric power station. From an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent, that the process is divided into two stages. There are considerable differences in water
circle
for day and nighttime. The Fix the agreement mistake
circles
water
stream initially
generates the energy during the day
Correct your spelling
daytime
time
in the sophisticated tool which has the reverse process of pushing the flow of the liquid by the pump at night time
.
To begin
with, the water
from the river wends to the high-level reservoir backed up by a dam. At
the Change preposition
In
day
Correct your spelling
daytime
time
the Add a comma
time,
water
flows by the pipe to the power station the generator section. The generator works with the help of the power lines and the national grid. The reversible turbines push the water
in daytime in the generator after it flows to the low-level reservoir, while
at night time
the system works in the opposite direction. The mechanism pumps water
backwards into the high-level container and the flow of the water
returns back again at
the high-level reservoir.Change preposition
to
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