The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart depicts how electricity is produced in a hydroelectric power station. From an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent, that the process is divided into two stages. There are considerable differences in
water
circle
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for day and nighttime. The
water
stream
initially
generates the energy during the
day
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daytime
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time
in the sophisticated tool which has the reverse process of pushing the flow of the liquid by the pump at night
time
.
To begin
with, the
water
from the river wends to the high-level reservoir backed up by a dam.
At
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the
day
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daytime
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time
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the
water
flows by the pipe to the power station the generator section. The generator works with the help of the power lines and the national grid. The reversible turbines push the
water
in daytime in the generator after it flows to the low-level reservoir,
while
at night
time
the system works in the opposite direction. The mechanism pumps
water
backwards into the high-level container and the flow of the
water
returns back again
at
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the high-level reservoir.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, time with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • hydroelectric power station
  • reservoir
  • potential energy
  • mechanical energy
  • electrical energy
  • turbine
  • generator
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • power lines
  • gate-controlled tunnels
  • gravity-driven
  • transformation
  • clean energy source
  • sustainable
  • recycled water
  • mountainous area
  • activate
  • transmit
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