A bar chart shows the percentage of men and women in Great Britain who had driving licenses and another bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who applied for driving licenses at the age of 17-20. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar charts illustrate the proportion of
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
with driving licenses in total and the Fix the agreement mistake
females
amount
of men and women who applied for Change the quantifier
number
the
licenses Correct article usage
apply
at
the age group of 17 to 20 in Britain from 1976 to 2006.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, from the given stat, we can understand that more men had the
driving license as Correct article usage
a
compare
to women in all the Change the form of the verb
compared
years
. Moreover
, the amount of both male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
who applied for driving licenses significantly increased over the period of 30 Fix the agreement mistake
females
years
. However
, the percentage of both young drivers
aged between 17 to 20 years
showed a slight dip from 1996 to 2006.
According to
the data, the percentage of men with license
increased by 10% over the Fix the agreement mistake
licenses
years
with the lowest of 70% in 1976 and highest
of 80% by 2006. Correct article usage
the highest
Similarly
, the numbers
of female Fix the agreement mistake
number
drivers
also
doubled from 30% in 1976 to 60% in 2006.
However
, in terms of young drivers
of 17 to 20 years
, the percentage of male drivers
applying for drving
Correct your spelling
driving
license
decreased from 50% in 1996 to almost 45% in 2006. Followed by females which decreased from almost 30% to 20% over the span of 16 Fix the agreement mistake
licenses
years
.Submitted by ashmamrzn on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, drivers with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
▼