A bar chart shows the percentage of men and women in Great Britain who had driving licenses and another bar chart shows the percentage of men and women who applied for driving licenses at the age of 17-20. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The left bar chart describes information about how many
men
and women
have driving certificates throughout the period
, and the right one illustrates the gender distribution of drivers between 17 years old and 20 years old in 1996 and 2006.
Overall
, it is clear that
both percentages of them have increased while
male people tend to possess the license more than female people, and though both figures for licenses in teenagers showed a fall.
In detail, in 1976, the percentage of men
who have driving license
started at 70% Fix the agreement mistake
licenses
whereas
the figure for women
stood at 30%, recording less than 40% compared to men
. During the period
, the statistic
about male individuals gradually rose to 80% in 2006. Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
However
, the figure for women
doubled at the end
of the period
. Therefore
, the increase in women
was bigger than that of men
, unlike the percentage that was smaller.
Regarding the remaining information, the percentage of young men
having a license accounted for 50% in 1996. Meanwhile, in 2006, it slightly dropped by around 5%. However
, the figure for young women
showed at 30% in 1996 and also
decreased to 20% in 2006. Both of them also
decreased during the period
but the women
one was larger than the men
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