The chart below shows the percentage of people in the UK who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day between 2001 and 2008

The chart below shows the percentage of people in the UK who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day between 2001 and 2008
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The bar chart illustrates information about the percentages of individuals categorized into three groups(
men
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women
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and
children
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) in the UK, who ate five
portions
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of vegetables and fruit every day from 2001 to 2008, with intervals of one year.
Overall
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, at first glance, it becomes clear that the highest
percentage
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of people who ate five
portions
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of green meals per day, was in 2006,
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, the lowest
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was in 2001.
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, the figure shows an upward increase almost during the whole period. It is evident that
children
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had the highest position among all groups,
while
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women
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had the lowest.
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, in 2001, more than 10 per
cent
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of
children
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, 17 and 23 per
cent
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of
men
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and
women
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, respectively, ate five
portions
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of green meals in a daily routine, and
this
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trend increased by a steady slope, until 2006. In 2006,
women
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consuming green
portions
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reached a high point of 35 per
cent
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.
Conversely
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,
while
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in 2006 the
percentage
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of
men
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consuming the green portion reached nearly 27 per
cent
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, the highest
percentage
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related to
children
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was approximately 26 per
cent
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in 2007.
At the end
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of the period,
women
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,
men
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and
children
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consume a five-day fruit and vegetables 30,26,24 per
cent
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, respectively,
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, children, portions, percentage, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Portion
  • Consumption
  • Fluctuation
  • Trend
  • Campaign
  • Public health
  • Dietary habits
  • Implications
  • Age group
  • Guidelines
  • Five-a-day
  • Nutrition
  • Lifestyle change
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Chart
  • Percentage
  • Data analysis
  • Diet
  • Healthy eating
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