The chart below shows the percentage of people in the UK who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day between 2001 and 2008
The bar chart illustrates information about the percentages of individuals categorized into three groups(
men
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women
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children
) in the UK, who ate five Use synonyms
portions
of vegetables and fruit every day from 2001 to 2008, with intervals of one year.
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Overall
, at first glance, it becomes clear that the highest Linking Words
percentage
of people who ate five Use synonyms
portions
of green meals per day, was in 2006, Use synonyms
In contrast
, the lowest Linking Words
percentage
was in 2001. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the figure shows an upward increase almost during the whole period.
It is evident that Linking Words
children
had the highest position among all groups, Use synonyms
while
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women
had the lowest. Use synonyms
Additionally
, in 2001, more than 10 per Linking Words
cent
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children
, 17 and 23 per Use synonyms
cent
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men
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women
, respectively, ate five Use synonyms
portions
of green meals in a daily routine, and Use synonyms
this
trend increased by a steady slope, until 2006. In 2006, Linking Words
women
consuming green Use synonyms
portions
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,
reached a high point of 35 per Remove the comma
apply
cent
.
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Conversely
, Linking Words
while
in 2006 the Linking Words
percentage
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men
consuming the green portion reached nearly 27 per Use synonyms
cent
, the highest Use synonyms
percentage
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children
was approximately 26 per Use synonyms
cent
in 2007.Use synonyms
At the end
of the period, Linking Words
women
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men
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children
consume a five-day fruit and vegetables 30,26,24 per Use synonyms
cent
, respectively,Use synonyms
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