The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different ages in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different ages in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides information about the total of adults of different ages from
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adolescents
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to the elderly in the UK who used the
Internet
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every day in the years 2003 to 2006.
Overall
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, there were fluctuating percentages in every life group. The most total of adults by
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group using the
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from 2003 to 2006 in the UK was the 16-24
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group. It started from 80% in 2003 and 2004, and improved to 100%,
then
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decreased to over 80% in 2006.
According to
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the graph, we can see different trends.
Firstly
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, the number experienced upward in the 25-44 and 45-54 groups.
Secondly
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, the total of people in 25-24
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who accessed
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Internet
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was about 50% in 2003 and increased to 80% in 2006.
Moreover
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, the almost same trend was happening with adults in 45-54
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, the count began from 60% in 2003
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and kept going up to 80% too in 2006.
On the other hand
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, there were upward and downward trends in other groups,
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as 55-64 and over 65. The number of citizens who accessed
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in the old
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tended to be low. It was about 30% to under 60% of people that used the
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in 55-64,
while
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the lowest number was elderly communities.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • age group
  • daily internet use
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • upward/downward trend
  • year-wise
  • distribution
  • fluctuation
  • highest/lowest
  • technological advancements
  • social changes
  • targeted marketing
  • internet usage patterns
  • technological familiarity
  • lifestyle
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