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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates how petroleum, coal and natural gas
was
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were
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produce
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produced
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in
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as
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 the main fuels in the UK from 1981
upto
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up to
 2000.
Firstly
 ,the
Production
 of Natural Gas in 1981 has
a
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apply
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steadily
increase
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increased
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 in 2000 in the
production
.
While
,
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apply
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 the
production
 of coal shows a slight decrease between 1981
upto
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and
 1986 meanwhile there is a steady
producation leve
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production level
 for about 60 from
year
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the year
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 1986
upto
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up to
 1991 with a decreasing
production
 level
for
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of
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 about 40 in
year
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the year
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 1991 .
Lastly
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Lastly,
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 the
production
 of petroleum has a significant
increase
 in
producation
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production
 from 1981
upto
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up to
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 1986 with a total
increase
 of 140 petroleum
production
also
 there is a slight decrease in
year
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the year
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 1991 with a total
prodcution
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production
 level of almost 100 followed by a slight
increase
 in
year
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the year
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 1996 with a total level of 140
upto
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the upto
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year
 2000.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words upto, production, increase, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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