The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts how families in a nation allocated their income during
one
Correct determiner usage
a
week
period from 1968 to 2018.
Correct your spelling
one-week
Overal
, the expenses spent varied from Correct your spelling
Overall
good
, housing, etc to leisure activities. It is notable that Fix the agreement mistake
goods
food
purchasing saw Use synonyms
the
peak level in 1968, Correct article usage
a
while
leisure spending took the lead in 2018.
In 1968, families used most of their money for Linking Words
food
, followed by the remaining categories. Use synonyms
While
35% of weekly income was prioritized for Linking Words
food
, others were just ranging from 6% to 10%, with fuel and power purchases experienced Use synonyms
the
bottom of all.
In 2018, there were significant changes in how weekly income Change preposition
at the
were
distributed. Remarkably, the families paid nearly 23% in total for Change the verb form
was
leisure
category, more than doubled to that of 50 years ago. Correct article usage
the leisure
Food
purchasing, Use synonyms
however
, Linking Words
undergone
Add a missing verb
has undergone
substantial
decrease from 35% to approximately 12%. Correct article usage
a substantial
Addtionally
, housing and transport expenses Correct your spelling
Additionally
also
witnessed whopping increases, from 10% and 8% to 18% and 14% respectively. The remaining elements saw relatively small fluctuations, with fuel and power still Linking Words
remained
the least Wrong verb form
remaining
priorites
.Correct your spelling
priorities
priority
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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