You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. •describe the problem with the equipment •explain how this problem is affecting your work •say what you want the shop or company to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

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am writing to you in order to

complaint

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about the

laptop

which

i

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recently purchased from your shop. let me explain the issue

which

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i

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faced related to

laptop

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the laptop

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. Actually

last

week

i

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bought

this

laptop

from your shop.

Firstly

,

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takes 20 to 30

mintues

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minutes

for starting

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the window

also

becomes overheating within 15

mintues

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minutes

.

Apart from

this

, the battery of

this

laptop

drain

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very

fastly

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. Eventually, the keyboard does not operate very well. These issues

has

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created a lot of problems for me because

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bought

this

laptop

for my work.

i

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mainly depend on

this

laptop

for my daily tasks and meetings with clients. When it takes a lot of time to start

then

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become late for

attend

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my

meeting

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and

also

other work on time.

Due to

overheating

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overheating,

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i

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could be blasted.

Moreover

,

unresponsive

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an unresponsive

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keyboard

furture

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future

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delays my work.

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kindly request

you

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that you take immediate action to

reslove

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resolve

this

matter as soon as possible.

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would be very helpful for me if you

replace

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or

repair

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this

laptop

under the warranty. if neither is possible

then

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expect a full refund. With regards, Jatinder Kaur