You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs show the changes in the UK steel industry between 1970 and 2000. (million tonnes vs thousand). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Value changes in UK steel industry 1970-2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The line graphs illustrate information about the

changes

in the UK steel industry

from

Change preposition

between

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1970 and 2000. The figure for

value

changes

given

Add a missing verb

is given

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Correct article usage

apply

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million tonnes,

while

the figure for employment status

are

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given in

a thousands

Correct the article-noun agreement

thousands

a thousand

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Overall

, it can be seen that

value

changes

for import

was

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were

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downward

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a downward

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trend. The number of employment decreased significantly. Looking first at

value

changes

, in1970, total UK demand started at 200000 and

then

pluged

Correct your spelling

plugged

plunged

to 100000 in the new year of the millennium.

Moreover

, there was a noticeable decline in UK production from above 150000 to under 100000 between 1970 and 2000.

Additionally

value

changes

for

import

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imports

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began at approximately 0 before increasing significantly to around 70000 during 1970. Moving on to employment status, the majority of employees

was

Unnecessary verb

apply

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stood at 50000 in 1970 and

then

dropped gradually to 40000 by 1980. Following that, there was a

plumeted

Correct your spelling

plummeted

to 20000 and continue negligibly decreased to just lower than 20000 in 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words changes, value with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

159 words

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