The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flowcharts give information about the manufacture of
cement
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concrete. As can be seen in the two charts, the production process of Linking Words
cement
is more complex than that of concrete. Use synonyms
While
the former consists of five distinct stages, from limestone and clay blended in a crusher to Linking Words
cement
packed into bags, the latter involves merely one step, which is adding all the ingredients into a mixer.
Looking at the Use synonyms
cement
-making process in more detail, the limestone and clay are put together to be crushed into powderUse synonyms
,
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then
blended in a mixer. Linking Words
Subsequently
, the material enters a rotating heater, where it is melted as it goes through the hit pipe before dropping onto a roller. Linking Words
After
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, a grinder helps convert those materials into Linking Words
cement
, and eventually, the end products are packed into bags.
Turning to concrete production which follows Use synonyms
cement
production, and it is much more simple than manufacturing Use synonyms
cement
, all we need is to mix four different ingredients in a large concrete mixer, made up of 15% Use synonyms
cement
, 10% water, 25% sand, and 50% gravel. Use synonyms
Finally
, the end product, concrete, is ready to be used in construction.Linking Words
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