The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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The chart illustrates the percentage of fruits and vegetables eaten in 5 or more servings by different age groups of men and women in the UK in 2016.
Overall
, 55-64
aged
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people consumed the largest number of these two products
while
in youngest 19-24 group observed the lowest
results
.
Furthermore
, almost in all ages men showed lesser
results
than females. Starting with males, in the 56-64 class, there was the biggest consumption at more than 30%
whereas
the youngsters showed only 15%. Observation of 25-34, 36-44 and 45-54 classifications were similar, 20% and a bit more.
Although
the
results
of 65-74 males were higher than 25%, after 74 it decreased to 20%. Regarding females, there were noticed considerably greater differences than men.
Similarly
, with males, women achieved their pick in eating fruits and vegetables in their 55-64 years at nearly 35%. 17% of 19-24 girls consumed
this
food and showed the lowest
results
. 25-34, 36-44 and 45-54 adults were in the middle of ranking 23%, 25% and 27% respectively. An average of older ladies stopped consuming more than 5 portions of fruit and veggies after their seventies, and 20% of elderlies ate them.
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