You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The pie charts illustrate the average percentages of
sodium
, saturated fats
, and added sugars
consumed during typical meals in the USA. These nutrients
, if consumed in excess, may pose health risks.
Overall
, dinner accounts for the largest proportions of sodium
and saturated fats
, while
snacks contribute the highest percentage of added sugars
. In contrast
, breakfast consistently contains the lowest amounts of these nutrients
.
In detail, dinner is the most nutrient-heavy meal, comprising 43% of sodium
and 37% of saturated fats
. Lunch is the second most significant contribuitor
, with 29% of Correct your spelling
contributor
contributors
sodium
and 26% of saturated fats
. Snacks stand out as the main source of added sugars
, accounting for 42%, while
also
contains
moderate amounts of saturated Wrong verb form
containing
fats
(21%) and sodium
(14%).
Breakfast, on the other hand
, is the lightest meal, providing only 14% of sodium
, 16% of saturated fats
, and 16% of added sugars
. This
makes it the healthiest meal in terms of these potentially unhealthy nutrients
.
In conclustion
, dinner and snacks are the primary contributors to excessive intake of Correct your spelling
conclusion
sodium
, saturated fats
, and added sugars
, while
breakfast remains the least concerning
in terms of these Change the form of the verb
concern
nutrients
.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, fats, sugars, nutrients with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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