You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three

types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
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The pie charts illustrate the average percentages of
sodium
, saturated
fats
, and added
sugars
consumed during typical meals in the USA. These
nutrients
, if consumed in excess, may pose health risks.
Overall
, dinner accounts for the largest proportions of
sodium
and saturated
fats
,
while
snacks contribute the highest percentage of added
sugars
.
In contrast
, breakfast consistently contains the lowest amounts of these
nutrients
. In detail, dinner is the most nutrient-heavy meal, comprising 43% of
sodium
and 37% of saturated
fats
. Lunch is the second most significant
contribuitor
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contributor
contributors
, with 29% of
sodium
and 26% of saturated
fats
. Snacks stand out as the main source of added
sugars
, accounting for 42%,
while
also
contains
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containing
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moderate amounts of saturated
fats
(21%) and
sodium
(14%). Breakfast,
on the other hand
, is the lightest meal, providing only 14% of
sodium
, 16% of saturated
fats
, and 16% of added
sugars
.
This
makes it the healthiest meal in terms of these potentially unhealthy
nutrients
. In
conclustion
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conclusion
, dinner and snacks are the primary contributors to excessive intake of
sodium
, saturated
fats
, and added
sugars
,
while
breakfast remains the least
concerning
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concern
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in terms of these
nutrients
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, fats, sugars, nutrients with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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