The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors’ contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry

 sectors’ contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main

 features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie diagrams illustrate how different economic activities contributed to the Turkey economy in 2000 and 2016.
Overall
, it is noticeable that all of the contributors fluctuated but healthcare and education.
Firstly
, agriculture plummeted from a percentage of 24 to 14, going from the first to the third most important.
Secondly
, healthcare and education remained stable over the years contributing 17%, becoming the principal source by 2016.
Moreover
, sectors like leisure and hospitality, and everything related to finance and business slightly decreased by 3 points,
as well as
the contribution provided by the government.
While
trade, utilities and transportation grew 2%.
Lastly
, manufactures went from 8 to 12 points; even more important was the change related to construction as it increased extraordinarily from 3 to 10% in the same period. To summarize, in Turley in 2000 the main activity was agriculture,
whereas
16 years later was replaced by the industry sector.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contribution
  • Percentage
  • Sector
  • Economy
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Notable
  • Trend
  • Period
  • Agriculture
  • Industry
  • Construction
  • Healthcare
  • Education
  • Trade
  • Utilities
  • Transportation
  • Finance
  • Business services
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