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The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates
change
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the change
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of
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amount
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the amount
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 of tea and coffee imported from four countries,
such
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 as Canada,
US
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the US
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,
UK
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the UK
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 and Germany. It can be seen that tea Great Britain has
great
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 resource of tea,
on the other hand
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,
rest
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the rest
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 of
countries
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the countries
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 inbound more caffeine than brew.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • import volumes
  • significant similarities or differences
  • trends
  • analyze
  • encapsulate
  • main findings
  • comparison
  • notably
  • illustrates
  • respective countries
  • amounts imported
  • tea imports
  • coffee imports
  • hints at underlying factors
  • proportion
  • per capita consumption
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