You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: * describe what the group does * explain why the group is good for the community * suggest alternative days and times for practice You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Manager, We are writing

letter

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a letter

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for

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to

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you because we are so upset and we

are thinking

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your

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you

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do not understand

this

group

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aim. We are not only

musician

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musicians

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we

at

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the same time teaching

musician

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musicians

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tools for children. The

child

love

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the

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music

and we

teaching

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because all

music

tools teaching is very expensive and

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the rightly

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rightly

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family do not want to go to

music

course

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courses

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but we established cheaper

music

course

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courses

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because we are student

university

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at university

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we need

to

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money and we think

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way. The family

like

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this

course

because cheaper

other

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than other

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courses and the

child

do

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not boring. Take the case of, sometimes family attended the

course

with

child

and they spend time together

this

is good for family and

child

.

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,

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course

not

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just for the benefit of children. As a matter of fact, our exams are starting and we do not have

a

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time. We

thinking

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only one day a week and we

talking

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family and families agreed with us. As a solution, we will do a

two hour

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course

once a week. I hope

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decision

good

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for you. Best regards