The diagram below show the life cycle of the sylkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth

The diagrams below depict the life circle of

silkworm

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a silkworm

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and the steps in the manufacture of the

silk

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cloth. From an

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perspective, it is readily apparent, that both

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processes are divided into several particular stages. The

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of formation and life

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cycle

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of the silkworm starts from the

laid

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laying

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of eggs by

mother

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the mother

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worm. After 10 days of the maturing the larva generate. The silkworm larva consumes mulberry leaves,

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and grows

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for 4 to 6 weeks. After the nymph

ready

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for another step, where

silk

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threads are produced and after 3-8 days larva makes the cocoon. The final step is the ageing

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which lasts 16 days and forms the moth. The second diagram shows the production of the

silk

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cloth. There are particular stages in

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technique.

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is the

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of

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selecting

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silk

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shells

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good quality and boiling them.

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shells enter to unwind

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where 300-400 m. threads are produced followed by twisting and weaving steps. Both of these stages

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in

dying

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the dying

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process

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in dyers for making specific

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colors

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