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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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 line charts give
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information
imformation
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information
 about the
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proportion
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propotion
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proportion
 of the levels of the main kinds of fuel in the
united kingdom
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United Kingdom
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 from 1981 to 2000
overall
,
it's
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it
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 can be seen that petroleum was the most
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proportion
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propotion
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prominent
 from start to
the
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end petroleum started with about 90
energy
 units after that it showed fluctuation in after next years and the end at 140
energy
 units in 2000 natural gas
was
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showed
increase
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an increase
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 trend,
started
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starting
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 with about 40
energy
untis
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units
 and
was
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ascending in after next
year
.
therefore
, in the
last
year
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there was
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was
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were
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 1000
energy
 units. opposite with natural gas,
so
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coal
was
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decrease
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decreased
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 trend,
started
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starting
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 with 80
energy
unit
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units
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 and
fluctuation
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fluctuating
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 in the
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some
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same
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 next
year
 and the
last
year
become
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became
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 the lowest choice,
about
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fuel production
  • Trend
  • Steady
  • Fluctuations
  • Significant
  • Milestones
  • Turning point
  • Peak
  • Decline
  • Evolve
  • Notable
  • Summarize
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