The pie chart below shows the different platforms used for international news content by people in United Kingdom in 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant

The pie chart below shows the different platforms used for international news content by people in United Kingdom in 2019 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant
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The data in
pie
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the pie
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chart demonstrates the various
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medium
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mediums
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which were used by the
citizen
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citizens
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of England to get international
news
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contain
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contained
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in the year 2019. From an
overall
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perspective, television is the most trusted
medium
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for international
news
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content.
On the other hand
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, what up mouth is
list
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a list
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use
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used
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for
news
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contain
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content
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.
To begin
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the chart source the television was the most authentic
medium
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that was used to know what was actually going around the world with 43% which is almost half of the total.
Additionally
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, other internet and not interested
contents
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content
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your exactly the equal portion
that is
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15%. Following
them
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them,
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social media
contain
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comes in thought place with 14%.
Furthermore
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,
printed
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newspaper is another used
medium
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for global
news
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content with a single digit of 8% followed by radio is half of the printed
newspaper
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newspapers
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which is 4% and
finally
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with
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apply
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one
percent
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per cent
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is word of mouth
we
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apply
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so people actually do not trust the word of mouth to get any
news
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words medium, news with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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