The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in teh USA, Canada, the UK and Japan in 2009.
The given bar chart illustrates the shares of
expenses
in 4 countries
, the USA
, the UK
and Canada
in 2009 in five major categories.
Overall
, the UK
and Canada
shared a higher amount of expenses
for housing and food while
the USA
shared the highest for housing. Meanwhile, Canada
shared the highest expenses
for transport among all countries
. On healthcare and clothing, all countries
shared relatively fewer expenditures.
The USA
shared around 26% of expenses
on housing while
the UK
and Japan shared roughly 24% and 23% of expenses
respectively. Meanwhile, for food, Japan shared around 24% of expenses
, however
, the USA
shared only approximately 14% of expenditures. In terms of transportation, Canada
shared the highest expenses
among other countries
which was around 20%.
For healthcare, the USA
shared the highest expenditures which was around 7%, and the rest of the three countries
shared around below 5%. In terms of clothing, the USA
and Japan shared around below
5% of Change preposition
apply
expenses
while
Canada
and the UK
shared around above 5% of expenses
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