The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in teh USA, Canada, the UK and Japan in 2009.

The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in teh USA, Canada, the UK and Japan in 2009.
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The given bar chart illustrates the shares of
expenses
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in 4
countries
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, the
USA
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, the
UK
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and
Canada
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in 2009 in five major categories.
Overall
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, the
UK
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and
Canada
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shared a higher amount of
expenses
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for housing and food
while
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the
USA
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shared the highest for housing. Meanwhile,
Canada
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shared the highest
expenses
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for transport among all
countries
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. On healthcare and clothing, all
countries
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shared relatively fewer expenditures. The
USA
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shared around 26% of
expenses
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on housing
while
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the
UK
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and Japan shared roughly 24% and 23% of
expenses
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respectively. Meanwhile, for food, Japan shared around 24% of
expenses
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,
however
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, the
USA
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shared only approximately 14% of expenditures. In terms of transportation,
Canada
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shared the highest
expenses
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among other
countries
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which was around 20%. For healthcare, the
USA
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shared the highest expenditures which was around 7%, and the rest of the three
countries
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shared around below 5%. In terms of clothing, the
USA
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and Japan shared around
below
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5% of
expenses
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while
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Canada
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and the
UK
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shared around above 5% of
expenses
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words expenses, countries, usa, uk, canada with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 7 times.
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