You ordered an item from an online shop three weeks ago. The shop said you would get the item two days later but you have not received it yet. Last week you sent an email about the situation to the shop, but you did not receive a reply. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter explain the situation complain about the bad service ask for immediate delivery of your order or your money back You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir, I hope

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letter

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context to an order that I placed three weeks ago. I ordered a

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toy car from your company's website on 25 March for my son's birthday gift. It was a prepaid order, and I was promised to get the delivery by 27 March, but the shipment remain undelivered

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date. In order to, know the status I contacted

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customer care

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week through mail, but they failed to answer my

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, the customer care department did not

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to contact me once.

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, I am highly dissatisfied with the conduct and ethics of your firm's employees. My son's birthday is on 24 April and I urge you to kindly deliver the gift item before

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date, if not , in that case kindly refund my money so that I can buy something else. I hope you will look into the matter personally and revert me with

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positive feedback. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jatinder.

mrsdnsMon Dec 16 2024

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

179 words

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