​​The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries: China and India. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

​​The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries: China and India. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts present the average
food
consumption in the world in 2018 compared with two countries
such
as
China
and
India
.
Overall
, Comparing the whole world,
China
and
India
. The same point of these three is Processed
Food
is the highest type of
food
consumed. And except in
India
, Vegetables and
Fruits
is the second
place
for the others.
Furthermore
, in the whole world, people commonly eat processed
food
at 41% percentages.
Then
, Vegetables and
Fruits
at 29%. After
that is
food
from animals at 26%. the less being chosen is grains at just 4%.
On the other hand
,
China
and
India
most consume processed
food
at 34% and 39%, respectively. But, The second
place
in
China
is vegetables and
fruits
at 32%,
while
in
India
is
food
made from animals at 27%. Following the third
place
is nuts and seeds in
China
at 19%, and the difference in
India
is veggies and
fruits
at 23%. The
Last
place
in
China
is animal
food
at 15%, and in
India
is grains at 11%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 90%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, china, india, fruits, place with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average consumption
  • Global composition
  • Food category
  • Meat, vegetables, fruits, grains
  • Percentage, proportion
  • Comparative analysis
  • Similarities and differences
  • Intake, consumption patterns
  • Striking differences
  • Notable similarities
  • Higher/lower consumption
  • Significant difference
  • Proportionate share
  • Relevant comparison
  • General trend
  • Insight
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