The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
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graph
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New Zealand import figures from Australia and
Japan
in
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from
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1994 to 2004.
Overall
,
imports
from Australia
has
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have
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fluctuated throughout the years,
while
Japan
decrease
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decreased
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over the years. It can be seen that in 1994,
imports
from Australia
starting
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higher than
Japan
with around 4000
million
. The number
then
shot up to over 6000
million
in 1996 before it slowly
decrease
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decreased
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and fell rapidly to 3000
million
in 1999. In 1999, the
imports
started
soared
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to over 7000
million
before
its
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their
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decline dramatically in 2002 and leapt until
reach
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it
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its
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peaks
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peak
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of 8000
million
in 2004.
In contrast
, the
imports
from
Japan
shows
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show
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a decline over the years. Starting low with 3000
million
in 1994,
then
rise rapidly to approximately 6000
million
in 1997 before it fell gradually to less than 4500
million
in 1999. The
imports
start
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to
climbed
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climb
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to 6000
million
in 2000 before
it
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they
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slumped until
reach
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reached
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the lowest number of 2000
million
in 2004.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, imports, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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