The average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person of four countries, United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 is indicated in the line graph. In this essay, I will introduce the trend and compare the data that’s shown in the chart.
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Firstly
, the United Kingdom has
the highest amount of CO2 Wrong verb form
had
emission
among all four countries, from 1967 to 2007. It started at around 11 metric tonnes
in 1967 and gradually dropped to about 9 metric tonnes
in 2007. In contrast
, Portugal has the lowest level of COS emissions though it has a rapid rise trend, which is just above 1 metric tonnes
in 1967 to over 5 metric tonnes
in 2007.
Furthermore
, Italy also
has an increasing CO2 emissions rate, from just above 4 metric tonnes
in 1967 to almost 8 metric tonnes
in 2007. More specifically, Italy was the second lowest in 1967 but their CO2 emission
has overtaken Sweden’s figure, turned to the second highest in 2007. Another thing which stands out in the chart is that Sweden is the only country that has an increase in CO2 emission
from 1967 to 1977, and then
there is a sharp decrease from 1977 to 2007, which lead
Sweden’s figure to around 5 metric Wrong verb form
led
tonnes
in 2007 and one of the lowest emission
countries with Portugal.
To conclude
, the chart has
clearly Verb problem
apply
showed
that the level of CO2 Wrong verb form
shows
emission
in Italy and Portugal have
both increased, Correct subject-verb agreement
has
while
the United Kingdom has a gradual drop and Sweden had
a rise and Wrong verb form
has
then
dropped rapidly.Submitted by kittycwy on
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