The average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person of four countries, United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 is indicated in the line graph. In this essay, I will introduce the trend and compare the data that’s shown in the chart.

The average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person of four countries, United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 is indicated in the line graph. In this essay, I will introduce the trend and compare the data that’s shown in the chart.
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Firstly
, the United Kingdom
has
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the highest amount of CO2
emission
among all four countries, from 1967 to 2007. It started at around 11 metric
tonnes
in 1967 and gradually dropped to about 9 metric
tonnes
in 2007.
In contrast
, Portugal has the lowest level of COS emissions though it has a rapid rise trend, which is just above 1 metric
tonnes
in 1967 to over 5 metric
tonnes
in 2007.
Furthermore
, Italy
also
has an increasing CO2 emissions rate, from just above 4 metric
tonnes
in 1967 to almost 8 metric
tonnes
in 2007. More specifically, Italy was the second lowest in 1967 but their CO2
emission
has overtaken Sweden’s figure, turned to the second highest in 2007. Another thing which stands out in the chart is that Sweden is the only country that has an increase in CO2
emission
from 1967 to 1977, and
then
there is a sharp decrease from 1977 to 2007, which
lead
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Sweden’s figure to around 5 metric
tonnes
in 2007 and one of the lowest
emission
countries with Portugal.
To conclude
, the chart
has
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clearly
showed
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that the level of CO2
emission
in Italy and Portugal
have
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both increased,
while
the United Kingdom has a gradual drop and Sweden
had
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a rise and
then
dropped rapidly.
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