The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and  reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates how 2 genders in 5 regions posessed
such
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a skill as
literacy
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between 2000 and 2004. It is obvious from the figures that women were less literate in each area, with the estimated
literacy
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world rate by almost 10 persent less
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men. Totally, scientists estemated both male and female
literacy
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level as 82,2% in all the regions. To start with, it can be seen that the most educated people were located in Europe, with total 98.8% of
literacy
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.
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, the gap between men and women was less than 1 percent in
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territory. Next two areas were Americas and Oceania, with just above 93% of estimated
literacy
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.
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, if in the first area difference between male and female rates was made up only 1 percent
as well as
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in Europe, in the
last
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one
this
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gap reached 1,5 percent.
On the other hand
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, Asia and Africa were in the end of the world in 2000-2004
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this
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research, with just over 80% and 62,5% of their total population knowing the spelling rules perspectively.
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, the rates between men and women varied drastically, up to almost 14% in Asian region and even 17% in Africa. In conclution, I can emphasise the fact that the lower the
literacy
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level in the region, the higher the difference between male and female education proportions.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words literacy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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