You and a friend have both been accepted to a study abroad program in Paris, France. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •Congratulate him/her for also being accepted •Ask him/her if he/she would like to be your roommate •Discuss possible activities that the two of you could do together

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Dear Aman, How're you ? Hope you are in good health . I'm writing

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letter to congratulate you

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getting admission

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our dream study program in Paris , France . I'm extremely happy for

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of us . Actually , you know very well ,it's our dream to

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study abroad program in Paris , France. We always

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about

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country since our school days .

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, we did it and I want to ask one thing . Would like to become my roommate in Paris ? As

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both

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relationship with each other and we know each other's

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in a great way . If

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to become my roommate during our stay in another country

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we can do numerous things together . First of all , it will become easy to do assignments and projects together ,because we

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great

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interest in

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program .

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, Cooking will be easy for

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of us . Apart from that , we can enjoy our

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leisure

time together

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watching movies and going outside . Tell me , if

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option is convenient for you or not

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I'll await

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your response

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your earliest convenience . Warm wishes , Harjeet

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structure

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grammatical

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variety

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greeting

The greeting and closing are friendly and appropriate for a letter to a friend.

tone

You expressed excitement and congratulations well, which creates a positive tone.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

216 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

congratulations
ecstatic
roommate
accommodation
expenses
cultural activities
museums
landmarks
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