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The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010. summarize the information by selecting and Reporting the main features and make relevant comparisons.

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010. summarize the information by selecting and Reporting the main features and make relevant comparisons.
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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of
students
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 who could speak other languages except English in 2000 and 2010 at a university in the UK. It is observed that there is a significant increase in the proportion of
students
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 who are speaking at least one other
language
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 during 10
years
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. It is worth noting that Spanish remained the most spoken second
language
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,
while
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 the percentage of
students
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 speaking no other
language
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 decreased. The figure for the German
language
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 remained constant in both
years
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.
According to
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 the charts, in 2000, 20% of
students
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 spoke no
language
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 other than English.
This
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 figure dropped to 10% by 2010.
Moreover
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, the proportion of
students
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 who can speak Spanish rose slightly from 30% in 2000 to 35% in 2010, making it the most popular
language
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 across both
years
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.
Additionally
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, the percentage of
students
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 speaking French declined gradually from 15% in 2000 to 10% in 2010,
whereas
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 those speaking German remained constant at 10% in both
years
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. There was
also
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 growth in the figure for
students
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 speaking two other languages, it increased from 10% in 2000 to 15% in 2010.
Furthermore
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, those speaking “another
language
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” climbed from 15% to 20%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, language, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • multilingual
  • linguistic competence
  • significant
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • stable
  • popularity
  • relatively
  • decade
  • compare/contrast
  • survey
  • data
  • fluent
  • proficient
  • bilingual
  • predominant
  • minority
  • emerge
  • dwindle
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