The charts below shows the percentage of people who ate five proportions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
The bar chart represents the numbers of people
that
regularly had an appropriate daily portion of fruit and Correct pronoun usage
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vegetables
intake in the Change the noun form
vegetable
uk
between 2001 Correct your spelling
UK
to
2008.the information was given for three categories(women,children,men)
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and
Overall
, there is an upward trend for all groups,with the
peak during 2006 and 2007, Correct article usage
a
then
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a decreased
decreased
in 2008.the ladies Replace the word
decrease
was
the Change the verb form
were
most
group eating healthy throughout the years, Correct quantifier usage
apply
while
the kids had a more significant raised
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raise
then
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than
gentle men
.
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gentlemen
According to
the graph
the males and youngsters remained unchanged during the first 3 years,Add a comma
graph,
then
in 2004 enhnce
about 3%-5% respectively.people continued to eat more green, with the highest percentage for men at around 27% in 2006, Correct your spelling
enhance
then
slowly decreased . Same as the kids, the peak aproxamintaly
26% in 2007, and slightly dropped to 24%.
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approximately
On the other hand
, females highest rate 35
% in 2006, Add a missing verb
was 35
then
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