The charts below shows the percentage of people who ate five proportions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

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The bar chart indicates data that people ate five

piece

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friuts

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fruits

fruit

or vegetables during a day in the UK

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between

2001 and 2008.

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, it can be seen that

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children

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and men continued until 2003 with the indicator that started in 2001.

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, women started

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a higher rate than others and remained higher than

children

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and men throughout the

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According to

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the graph,

children

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started consuming fruits and vegetables at about 13%, peaked at 28

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in 2007, and reached 26

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at the

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end

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of the

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children

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started consuming fruits and vegetables at about 13%, peaked at 28% in 2007, and reached 26%

at the

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end

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of the

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, men started with 27% at the beginning of the

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and received the highest grade during 2006-2007.

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end

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, they ate approximately 9% more daily meals than at the beginning.

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, women started at 23% but peaked in 2006 for food and by the

end

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of the

period

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were higher than others with 30%.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words children, period, end with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

173 words

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