the diagrams show how the bee makes honey,and the stages in the production of honey. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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The pictures illustrate the process by which

honey

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is produced by

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bee

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bees

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to become

availabe

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available

at stores. Making

honey

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bee

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bees

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involves 6 stages

and

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apply

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and the production of

honey

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has 5 different steps. Regarding

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apply

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the first diagram, the first stage is that the

gueen

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queen

green

bee

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gives birth to

egg

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the egg

an egg

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honeycomb

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a honeycomb

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, after three days

they

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become

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becomes

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larva

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a larva

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following

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and following

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this

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, a fully grown larva

excists

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exists

a week later. Three more weeks

passes

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pass

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in order

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for

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bee

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become

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to become

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ready to leave the

hive

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. After leaving

it's

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its

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hive

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it's

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its

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duty is

gathering

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to gather

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nectar from flowers, once the nectar is been gathered, it is

then

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left in

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hive

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the hive

a hive

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in order to become

honey

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and

this

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cycle continues. If we look at the second diagram,

initially

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making

honey

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in factories begins with the honeycomb being removed from

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hive

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the hive

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beekeeper

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the beekeeper

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, after

honeycomb

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the honeycomb

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being

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removed, it is

then

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put

onto

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into

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machine

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a machine

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for

honey

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extraction

perocess

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process

, and

then

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the cleaning process happens by boiling the extracted

honey

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, once the remained liquid

that is

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pure

honey

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has been put in jars, the jars are

then

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distributed to stores and are ready for sell.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

188 words

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Many of the medical problems that people are experiencing in today's world are due to the fact that we have a very sedentary lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree?