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This chart gives information about the number of people who play video games on a computer or device. Summarise the information by reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons. (Around 150 words)

This chart gives information about the number of people who play video games on a computer or device. Summarise the information by reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons. (Around 150 words)
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The data shows the number of individuals who play
video
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games
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 based on factors like gender, race,
age
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, and education.
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, male Americans are found to consume more
video
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games
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 than females. Among the 3 races included in the data, Hispanics play
video
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games
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 the most.
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, when looking at the
age
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 brackets, 18 to
29 year-olds
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29-year-olds
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 play more compared to other
age
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 groups. It was
also
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 found that people who have a bachelor's degree or higher
play
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pay
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 less than everyone else. When analysing the data, we find that close to 50% of all males in the United States reported playing
video
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games
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 either often or sometimes, compared to only 39% of females. White people are reported to play less than everybody else with only 41%, but interestingly, of those who do, more reported playing "often" than those who reported playing "sometimes".
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, Hispanics, who reported playing more
overall
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, had more players in the "sometimes" category compared to those in the "often" one. 60% of
indivuidals
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individuals
 aged between 18 to 29 reported playing, compared to only 24% in the oldest
age
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 group (65+). College students came on top when it comes to
percentage
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the percentage
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 of players, as half reported either playing often or sometimes,
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 only 36% of people that have a bachelor's or higher were gamers.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words video, games, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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